In Language Arts, we made books that illustrated our stories of our ideal worlds with artist Peg Gignoux. This is my book (above) and story:
My Ideal World (Duoluan)
For the first time in a long while, I saw trees—no, only one—or something that resembled it, at least. They were a contrast to the sparkly-clean gray and white corridors I have grown so accustomed to. I reminded myself that I wouldn’t be seeing that again in quite a while…
I kind of can’t since my ship crashed into an asteroid. It’ll be a while till I can get it up and running, if at all. I think I am in a sort of desert, but instead of sand, the ground is made up of gray translucent crystal. Maybe it could help fix the ship…
The tree is right in front of me, so I inspect it closely. The tree is unlike any other tree I have seen before – it is bathed in color, but the surrounding crystal is transparent. I look down, but it gets dark down there. I think I saw some sort of stone. From my view on the ship, all I saw was this desert. It will be hard to survive here. I suddenly have a feeling of shrinking as I realize I am a good two inches shorter. Maybe higher gravity did this?
I look down and realize that my feet are stuck in quicksand. It is made of tiny bits of the once-solid crystal, which is apparently incredibly weak. Traversing this terrain may be harder than I expected. I turn around to see that the ship has sunk halfway into the sand, too, but it seems stable now. I collect a sample to send back to my friends in Sakaron. I call over T89YT and give him the package. Hopefully, they’ll get it before the Mekan do. I didn’t expect to crash into an asteroid, but Zal did say I was a lousy driver. I wish I had listened to him. Annoyed, I throw my phone onto the ground and stomp away.
Almost immediately, I feel a rumbling under my feet and rush into the ship, though it won’t provide me with much protection, now that it has a gaping hole in the port side. I turn just in time to catch what looks like a ginormous, fiery worm surface 50 feet away. It leaps out of a smoking hole in the ground like a dolphin, and a second too late, I realize where it is headed.
This creepy worm ate my phone!!!! THE ONLY WAY I HAVE TO CONTACT THE OUTSIDE WORLD IS GONE!!!! “What was that worm, anyway?” I wonder. I decided to call it a florm. Flame + Worm. I debate following the florm down its hole. It is a terrible idea for many reasons, one of which is that I don’t know how deep that hole is. I also don’t have a choice. I grab a flashlight from the ship; It’ll probably be dark.
I look down the hole. With the flashlight, I can now see the bottom of the hole. Luckily, it is only about 10 feet down. I slide down easily as I pursue the florm. The hole is still smoking, but I bring a mask with me, assured it will keep the smoke out of my face for now. As I race after the florm, I wonder what I am doing here after all, why should I follow the florm, and what wealth will it bring me? I don’t know the answers to either of those questions, but I hope I will soon…
I walk for what feels like an hour, with no sign of an end. With the Pathwalkers on, I walk four times as fast as I would normally, but apparently, that still isn’t enough to get me to wherever I’m going quickly enough. I don’t have enough food to last more than three days, and that’s pushing it. At the end of the first day, I take a break to sleep, though I don’t know what time it is. I just ate and feel tired, so I figure somewhere in the evening—if this planet even has “evening.”
After a restful slumber, I wake up and start moving. I tell myself that it’s good exercise and it’s fun! My body agrees with me about the former. I keep running for a while. My legs hurt, but I tell myself that I am almost there, not that I believe it myself. Then, I trip over something solid. Solid, not strange crystal sand. SOLID! I look up and realize that the ceiling is a stone that is familiar to me. I have never been so happy to see a site. I look down to see what I tripped over, and it’s a root!! There must be water around here somewhere…
After thirty minutes, I finally see flashing lights. As I crawl out of the tunnel, I am greeted by an unreal landscape compared to the desert I was in earlier. The sun shines overhead, but it differs from the star I saw in the desert. Did I somehow jump planets? Nothing is the same! The trees’ leaves are pink and fluffy, like cotton candy, and the trunk seems to be flowing. Some trees are more like 10 feet, but the majority tower above the clouds. I look at my Gravimeter, and realize this planet has low gravity! 5.98 m/s/s. That must be why I didn’t feel tired after running all that way. This planet must be HUGE!
The climate here is perfect for life. So why isn’t there any large life? I look up at the massive trees as I suddenly understand. The trees are houses! If I look carefully, I can see bridges connecting the trees to one another in the lavender sky. If only we could learn from these people. They built their houses in trees so they could have trees and houses. Smart…
I have to contact them.
They might be able to fix my ship. I climb the tree, getting maybe one-seventeenth of the way to the top before I slip. Luckily, the lower gravity prevents a hard landing. I land at the base of the tree, staring at a blatantly obvious door—it couldn’t be more obvious if there were a sign on it saying “door.” I open the door and step into a wonderland.
The first thing I notice is the aroma. It oddly smells like fresh flowers, chocolate, and other things I like. The lower gravity and humidity. It is humid and tropical and there are vines everywhere. I could spend hours upon hours exploring every aspect of this place, but I need to repair my ship. I think about how my ship looked after crashing into an asteroid. Scratch that; I need a new ship! I put my translator on since I don’t know what language everyone here speaks. As I make my way up a narrow stairwell, I encounter an alien. Or, I guess, a native. I suppose I’m the alien here and I’ve watched enough alien movies to know that they are presumed the bad guy. I need to try and keep my distance or else I might not be getting off this planet.
The translator works as advertised, and I learned that they are called the builders. They are tall and look strong. They have thick bark-like skin and purple eyes. They are a pacifist species left to thrive in this world. A few Koron are also with them. The Koron make up their entire military force. Apparently, they had spotted me miles away. I ask to speak with their leader and am led to an empty chamber—the alien who introduced himself to me as Ingurr walks into the room. “I am the leader,” he says. I ask him for a favor.
I departed with my borrowed spaceship 18 hours later, fully rested and fed. Looking down on this side of the planet, it looks like the paradise that it is. I assure myself that I will return as I fly through the bright yellow clouds and ascend to the red dwarf sun. As I fly out, I realize the blue sun I saw in the desert wasn’t a trick of the light. There are, in fact, two suns. One is blue, and the other is a red giant. Strangely, there are also only two planets in the system. One gas giant, close to the sun, and the other is Duoluan (that’s what the builders call their planet), the paradise for all.
I will come again.